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(638 days 12 hours ago )
you still have not shown that this footage from the Japanse Home version......it can be very misleading if not stated and will be taken down.
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Bad Editing:
(638 days 13 hours ago ) Fixed 638 days 13 hours ago
How about you capitalize the first word of the title, first word of the sentence, and use a period at the end of the sentence. All basic grammar rules.
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Bad Editing:
(638 days 13 hours ago ) Fixed 638 days 13 hours ago
make sure you mention it is the JAPANESE version of HOME
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